Monday, November 26, 2012

Tuesday, November 20, 2012

The highwayman

So What:in my class we read the poem the the highwayman.

Now What:to look at the poem closely when I had to draw the highwayman.

Thursday, November 15, 2012

My First Memory


 When my Mum,Dad my sister,brothers and I went to the Northland, we went to Rainbows End. We went to the lolly shop but we couldn't make our own lollies because it was closed.We stayed in a hotal in Auckland because we did not have a house. 

Bears Report


WALT: Write an information report on an animal.
So What:In my class we  have been learning how to write a information report  on a chosen topic using the correct struchure
Now What:To make it in my own words and not the storys


Tuesday, November 13, 2012

Athletics assessment

WALT: Assess ourselves on how well we did in the Oaklands Athletics Day.
 So What: In our class we had to do an assessment on the athletics day. This is mine.

Limericks poem

WALT:write a limericks with the correct rhyming and rhythm patterns.

There was a girl called Iona
Who was such a terrible loner
She lived with her mother
Who was like no other
And found she was a great groaner.

SO WHAT:in my class we have been learning to write a limericks the first two words the rhythm 
NOW WHAT:to put more rhyming words

Thursday, November 8, 2012

Katie's car

Katie's car

WALT: Write poetry using onomatopoeias.
So What:we had to chose what we wanted our onomatopoeias  poetry to be about I chose the car    the we had to chose five thing that end with ing then one word that does not end in ing and had two write that three times then what it does
Now What:to put more detail

Wednesday, November 7, 2012


             THE MONKEY

He is a leaper,
Leaping in the mighty jungle.

He is a food disposal,
Snapping is sharp teeth.

He is an acrobat,
Flipping round and round.

He is an entertainer,
Exciting tourists with tricks.

He is a swing,
Rocking backwards and forwards.

In the trees of the jungle,
He is the king.

WALT: Use metaphors in poetry 
So What: In our class we have been learning to write poetry with metaphors. I chose to do mine on the monkey.
Now What: I think I should add more detail.

Friday, November 2, 2012

The Athletic Sports

The Athletic sports were usual  enough; it had
The shot put,the discus,the long jump,the high jump
And even the long distance
I never went to. My class mates, my friends and I
Did what 11 year old girls do; stretched our legs over
the high jump,ran like the speed of light,threw the shot put as far as possible,cheered our friends on,gave them a hug if they came in a place or did well, did your best.

Eating a picnic on the field.

WALT:use poetic verse to recount a memory.