school camps are a waste of time

I believe school camps give opportunity to try new activities and develop skills, like rock climbing,high ropes and coasteering to hanging out with your friends around the camp fire. Even thought you can hang out with your friend at school its more exciting at camp.You get out of your comfort zone and do things you never thought you could do.

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